Furlano, P., Godoy, B. & Goyeneche, X
A Comparative Analysis of Education
and Medicine Research Articles
Research Articles (RAs) are papers written by investigators
to illustrate an outcome of scientific research with supporting data. RAs are
generally divided into different sections, namely Title, Abstracts,
Acknowledgements, Introduction, Literature Review, Methods, Results,
Discussions, Recommendations, References and Appendixes (Swales & Feak,
1994). The purpose of the current study is to analyze and compare the
Introduction and Methods sections as well as the Literature Review of two
research papers of different disciplines; one in the education field and the
other in the medicine one.
Swales and Feak
(1994) has created the Create a Research Space Model (C.A.R.S.) which describes
the general organizational patterns as regards how writers should present their
introductions. They suggest three Moves in RAs’ Introductions; in Move 1 the
writer establishes a research territory by reviewing previous research and
outlining the importance of the study; in Move 2 the author establishes a niche
by indicating the gap that has been found in the area; and in Move 3 the writer
occupies the niche by outlining the purposes of the current study and how the
investigation will accomplish for the field.
Both analyzed
articles attempt to show that the research studies are worth considering. Valk,
Rashid, and Elder, (2010) remark the increasing exploration of
the potential of mobile phones to facilitate learning nowadays; and Besierre,
Pressman, Kiesler, and Kraut, (2010)
affirm that as the number of Internet users is growing rapidly, it is important
to assess how it affects people’s well-being. As regards the revision of
previous research, in the education research article the author makes more
generalizations about the subject and reviews more in depth items of previous
research. This is not as clear in the medicine article as there is little
evidence of previous research in Move 1.
As regards verb tenses and their mastering when writing different sections of research papers, both articles make good use of them as expected for introductions. The present simple is used to establish current
state of knowledge and the writers’ research, the present perfect is used to
say what has been found and the past simple, though it is not included in the
introduction of the education paper, is used in the medicine one to show
results of previous research.
The articles’ motivations for the study lack the exploitation
of the proposed topic in question. They start Move 2 with a negative opening
stating that more evidence is needed. On the one hand the authors of the
educational paper state that: “however, there remains a lack of analysis that
brings together the findings of the rising number of m-Learning projects in the
developing world” ( Valk et al. 2010, p. 2). On the other hand the medicine research points
out that: “although prior research has shown…little reliable information exists
about the impact of using the Internet to obtain health resources, especially
in non-clinical populations” (Bessiere et al., 2010 ). Move 2 is very short as
it is the link that joins Move 1 and 3.
Concerning Move 3, even though both articles outline the
purpose of the study, they differ in some features included. The education
paper announces principal findings and indicates the structure of the Research
Paper. On the contrary, in the medicine article these features are placed in a
different section namely Current Study. The medicine article contains
both a descriptive and a purposive statement as it not only states the purpose
of the research but also describes the present study. Besierre et al. (2010) announce that “the
purpose of the current research was to determine whether using the internet for
health purpose is beneficial or harmful to physical and psychological
well-being.” (p.2). Furthermore, the author explains how the study was
conducted. On the contrary the educational paper only contains a descriptive
statement initiating Move 3.
With reference to literature review,
in the medicine article, as exposed previously, there is little on formation
about the topic of the research paper. A more complete review is presented in
two extra headings, Health Resources Online and Non-Medical Internet Use.
Regarding education research paper the author makes a general revision of the
literature, analyzing the topic in a broad way, placing specific information in
three subsequent headings, Theories of Mobile Learning, The role of Mobiles in
Improving Access to Education, and The Role of Mobiles in Promoting new
Learning.
Both articles use a
wide variety of sources. While the medicine article bases their searches on
online medical journals and online libraries, the educational paper utilizes
books as well as articles in its digital version, a newspaper article and a
paper from a conference. Regarding the way of acknowledging the sources
chosen, the articles differ from the method employed. While the medicine paper
acknowledges sources with a number system, the educational article uses in text
citations following The American Psychological Association (2008 ) manual’s requirements.
When analyzing social scientific research papers it is
indispensable to remember what type of research it is. According to
Sampieri, Collado and Lucio (1998), scientific research is a type of research
which is systematic, controlled, empiric and critical. Systematic and
controlled because as any discipline it is based on a system; empiric because
it is based on observable issues and critical because it is under permanent
objective observation and reflection. Thus, it is of utmost importance to
remember research’s characteristics when delving into this type of study.
To be able to
analyze research reports it is crucial to know about research types. Dankhe (1986, cited in Sampieri et al., 1998) states
that there are four types of research studies: exploratory, descriptive,
correlational, and explanatory. Thus, each type of research study implements a
different research method or strategy; components such as the design, data and
sample will vary depending on the chosen research type and each of them is use
different research tool to carry out the study.
In light of the typology to take into account when
examining research reports, it can be identified that the paper in the
educational field belongs to the descriptive type. Sampieri et al. (1998)
state that descriptive studies measure
concepts and focus on measuring the characteristics of a particular phenomenon.
This type of research answers the questions who, what, where, when and how and
deals with everything that can be counted or studied.
Valk et al.
(2010) delved into case studies for the purpose of examining the
existing evidence of m-Learning as a tool to exert a positive impact on
educational outcome. The authors identified relevant m-Learning pilot projects
by searching academic publications, as well as conducting a general internet
search. The selected projects document results and have evidence, both
qualitative and quantitative, thus, definitive conclusions can be drawn
regarding the impact of mobile phone on education.
As regards the method of
study employed in the medicine field it can be assumed that it is a
correlational study. According to Waters (n.d.) correlational research is a
type of quantitative study in which two or more variables from the same group
are analyzed and correlated (brought into reciprocal relation), to determine if
there is a relationship or covariation between the variables. Bessiere et al. (2010) used a
non-experimental method in their research. Thus, they did not manipulate
variables deliberately; they just observed the phenomenon and then analyzed it.
The researchers conducted a national survey of US households, using random
digit dialing, to determine whether using the Internet for health
purposes is beneficial or harmful to physical and psychological well-being.
In relation to the Method section, the medicine article
includes the traditional subsections Procedure and Participants, it also adds
Measures and Statistical Analysis subsections, omitting the Material one. On
the contrary the educational article does not make the division among
participants, method and procedure. And the information is placed in a
subsection called Methodology. Both articles contain a great amount of
information. While the medical paper utilized technical vocabulary the explanations
in the educational article are clearly exposed with simple language and
straightforward explanations. The simple past tense is used to describe methods
and data of the experiment.
Although both papers
do not follow strictly the requirements for writing research papers, they
contain the information specified for each section. On the whole they provide
the necessary information concerning introductions, literature reviews and
method section and they are written in an academic style. In the hope of
gaining understanding of the construction of research articles in different
disciplines, an analysis of two research papers, a medicine and an educational
one, was carried out. An awareness of the rules and conventions of research
papers can help learners to become better writers and professionals and thus
showing the path to develop themselves as members of a discourse community.
References
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